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Where'd the football go? by =Mr-Jolted:iconMr-Jolted:


©2008-2009 =Mr-Jolted
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"Behind the bleachers!"

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One: First and foremost, I did NOT draw this. Seriously. I dont have this kind of skill. The man behind this is :iconsivomaniacal: He rocks and he's awesome. He's rockwesome. I dont really remember why, but he offered to draw Suzuna for me. Never gotten ANYONE to bother to draw her. Even though I've always given them the option. I have no idea why, tho.

Anyway. for starters, Sivo has been gracious enough to give me permission to post this. I'm actually surprisingly happy with what I've done and how its turned out. Hard as that is to believe.

Secondly, I could not have done ANY of this if it was not for: :iconrequiem-shade: & :iconhimitsudragon: . Honestly, I wouldnt have. Requiem gave me a few tips on how to do the lines, and then Himi gave me suggestions on shading. And, it just went from there. They both helped me out greatly, by giving me their opinions on the shadings and highlights. I respect them both for putting up with me on this. Thanks! ^^

Yes. Crappy background. Who cares? No one's gonna actually SEE this. It'll quickly and easily be ignored. And, besides, those that DO see it...aint gonna be looking at the background. Frankly, I could have just put a picture of a turd in the background, and no one would notice. All that will be noticed, is t3h belly. Not that's a bad thing...Still...

And, hey, I'm open to CONSTRUCTIVE criticism about my coloring. I know its not that great. I'm happy with it, sure. But, I could be better and I know it. This is only the fourth thing I've ever colored and completed in anyway. And only the first to get a public showing. Seriously, the thing I'm MOST happy about that I did...is the way I did the hair. How messed up is THAT?! :XD:

Suzuna Taki copyright of whoever owns Eyeshield 21.

Also: Himi came up with the title. I liked it. So there =p
Also2: This better be the right damn category. God damn its confusing.
Also3: Like anyone bothered to read all of that :XD:

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:iconhimitsudragon:
I deny everything XD

still a good pic, a nice coloring job, far better then what I can do, especialy the hair.


also...

I read all that

that mean I'm not anyone?

--
"People are capable of kindness beyond angels...
Yet we also commit sins that would put a demon to shame."
:iconcoffinsandman:
I really like it either way. Great work on the coloring.
:iconsakenomiko:
Daww! I really love Suzuna and es 21. Overall I think the coloring is a nice job, it's crisp and clean. If anything, I would add another level of shadows possibly? something a little darker and more extreme? That's just a preference to shading of course, so it's just how I feel. The other thing i notice is her skirt, yes the stomach would cast a shadow, but since it is a pleated skirt, there would also be some shading between the pleats? (to create depth). All and all great work ^-^ Very cute coloring
:iconmr-jolted:
Well, I deny your denial!
:iconmr-jolted:
Ah! Thank you! I thought there was something more I could do to teh skirt, but just could not for the life of me figure out what. This totally clears that up! I may go back in later and fix that. Thank you. I may also try you suggestion on the darker shadows in the next project (provided I find one). :salute:
:icongrimphantom:
Your might not be skilled at drawing but you're very skill at coloring, I like it.
:iconsivomaniacal:
Advanced critique encouraged? What.... that mean...? Sivo no like big words...

Picture good. Color nice. Think highlights need be brighter. Hair have one more layer of highlight than does skin. Plastic, too.

Make sense, this thing?
:iconsakenomiko:
^-^ It's not a problem at all!! If you ever find anything of mine that looks interesting, um you are free to use it as coloring fun! XD And if you'd ever like to chat about anything, note me or im me, whatever you'd like ^-^ X3 Suzuna's soo cute!

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